Amber Skye Forbes

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The Madness of Synopses

Book synopses are just as terrifying as queries. With a query letter, it’s possible to mask plot holes that still exist in your manuscript, but with synopses, you cannot get away with plot holes in your novel unless you lie. So in order to do an effective synopsis, you have to make certain there are no plot holes in your manuscript, because, more than likely, they are going to show up in your synopsis.

So what is the difference between a summary and a synopsis? A summary simply summarizes the gist of the book without spoilers. You don’t need to tell readers everything in a summary–only enough to get their attention without ruining the entire book. A synopsis, on the other hand, is for the eyes of professionals alone. You have to reveal everything, including spoilers, so that way your agent or editor knows whether or not that partial you sent is worth a read. If holes show up in your synopsis, they’ll likely exist in that partial you sent, and no agent or editor will want to read the partial knowing there are plot holes that could cost your manuscript it’s practical life. Sometimes plot holes are so bad they cause entire re-writes.

I was terrified of writing the synopsis for When Stars Die. I had never really done one. All my previous attempts at query letters failed, but that was because my books were currently failures themselves. So I came to the synopsis with trepidation. I did countless research on how to do the best one. I went to YALITCHAT to read examples of synopses that were doing it both right and wrong and internally critiqued what they could do better. Then I set out writing my own.

Depending on the length of the synopsis (mine was advised to be no more than 500 words), you only need the bare bones of the plot. No sub-plots or minor characters or anything else that deviates from the main plot. This means you really have to know your book well and that the story needs to be polished in order to have a successful synopsis. The only two characters I included in my synopsis were Amelia and Oliver, two major characters that influenced the book far more than anyone else. I mentioned her brother, but didn’t refer to him by his name. I also mentioned her best friend, but no referral to her name either.

Because Amelia and Oliver were so major, I was able to parce the book down to just their major actions and what parts they played to push the main plot along. Only thinking about Amelia and Oliver made it that much easier to tear down my book to the main plot only. Of course, because it was only 500 words, I had to strip down the plot even more. I had to dish out things as they were. I didn’t need to do long-winded explanations to explain things because, hey, it’s only 500 words and whoever is reading it will receive those answers in the book. This person only needs to know the major points of the plot that push the book to its climax and resolution.

For longer synopses, you can get more detailed. Amelia accidentally harms her best friend with fire. I mention this in the synopsis. I then mention that her best friend shows up later with a warning, but I didn’t bother with explaining what happened to her best friend or how she was able to show up. In a longer synopsis, I might have been able to detail that, but there was no room, so I had to move on.

Synopses are not easy. I still had to have my synopsis parced down, but it was only sentence-wise, not content wise. You need to make certain your sentences are as concise as possible because that will obviously help with the length of your synopsis.

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9 comments on “The Madness of Synopses

  1. L. Marie
    May 11, 2013

    Wow. This is really, really helpful. I didn’t know the difference between the two. (Hangs head.) I hate writing synopses. Mine have sounded so booooooorrrrrring. Queries aren’t much better. But I need to improve.

    • amberskyef
      May 11, 2013

      Keep in mind synopses aren’t about keeping interest. They are about showcasing both your writing and the direction of your story.

  2. Wanderer
    May 11, 2013

    Great advice. I’ curious to know what would happen in a case where the sub-plots become vital to the central story and its outcome later on. My WIP has plots that seem to be unrelated at first but soon merge. Would I put those sub-plots in or leave them out, because doing so would seem like a deus ex machina kind of resolution.

    Book Worms looks interesting, is it published?

    • amberskyef
      May 11, 2013

      Book Worms isn’t mine, lol. It was an example I found. All sub-plots should eventually become vital to the main plot at some point in the book, or else they serve no purpose. You mainly want to leave sub-plots out. The part where I mention her best friend is actually a sub-plot, but you can’t even tell because I say something like this in my synopsis, “Amelia finds best friend during witch burning who tells her huge plot twist.” I don’t answer how her best friend came back from being burned, what her best friend is, and why her best friend is there because it’s not important to the synopsis. Synopses don’t serve entertainment purposes. They give whoever is reading them an idea of where your main plot goes, so even if it is a deus ex machine, whoever is reading it will assume there is more to that through sub-plots.

  3. amberskyef
    May 11, 2013

    *machina*

  4. Nadeen Chrystal Davis
    May 11, 2013

    Thank you for sharing. I learn something new every single day. Amazing! lol…

  5. Wanderer
    May 12, 2013

    After a web search I fund out that Gayton Gomez is the author of Book Worms. I can’t find if it has been published yet though.

    Thanks again.

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